9/11 Essay Proofread-intro only.

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Hi guys, I'm writing an essay for my challenge and change course regarding the events of 9/11 and how they affected individuals psychologically, physically, and how religious cultures like islams were affected. here is my intro, i hope some people can help me finish the sentence as well give me pointers on where i should add or fix some content. Thanks.

September 11th, 2001, a day that changed America and it’s people forever, affecting the way Americans view certain religions, the government, and themselves. The tragic hijacking of four aircraft, two of which flew into the World Trade Centre, one which shamed*into the Pentagon and one which flew into a*Pennsylvanian field had left so many Americans puzzled, trying to answer the question “who committed these acts of terrorism and why?”. The almost 3,000 people that died as an immediate result of the incident left individuals with psychological effects that will remain with them for the rest of their lives. Also, some families had loved ones that passed away from the attacks, they had to deal with the loss, depression and the loneliness that came with it. Months after the attacks - when people started asking more questions - people were questioning the government, asking “why they didn’t prevent this”. The government of America had been weakened by these attacks but retaliated on Iraq and Afghanistan because they assumed that these Countries were affiliated with this ambush. Due to Americas retaliation against these other Countries, Americans began scrutinising Islams, and misjudging them all as bad people. The 9/11 event had so many different impacts on everybody all over the world,

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