CCCPres needs your help

[CCCPres]

Hi everybody,

I got a ton of PM's with some great ideas on a radio ad campaign and I've added a few of my own.

Now I need your votes to help pick the best two. Bring them on.

BTW- We've decided to go with AM640 and 680 News in the GTA and if its succesful we'll expand the campaign across the country.

Thx
CCCPres


TAG #1

With insider pricing information we guarantee you’ll buy your new car cheaper. Visit CAR COST CANADA DOT COM for your confidential wholesale savings report and save big.


TAG #2

Get your new car cheaper with secret factory rebates. Save even more when you know the real pricing story. Visit CAR COST CANADA DOT COM for confidential price reports.

TAG #3

Thinking of buying a new Honda, Hyundai or Hummer? Go to CAR COST CANADA DOT COM first to get dealer invoice prices, secret factory rebates and more. Go to CAR COST CANADA DOT COM.

TAG #4

Uncover huge unadvertised secret factory rebates only at CAR COST CANADA DOT COM. Plus get a big dealer discount with invoice prices and more. Go to CAR COST CANADA DOT COM.

TAG #5

Negotiate like a pro with secret factory rebates from CAR COST CANADA DOT COM. Plus get a big dealer discount, dealer invoice prices and more. Go to CAR COST CANADA DOT COM.

TAG #6

You’ve heard it’s a great time to buy a new car. But how? Its easy with dealer invoice prices, big dealer discounts and secret factory rebates from CAR COST CANADA DOT COM.

[TheCheez]

Why so much emphasis on 'secret rebates'?

I really like your service but you present it like a bad infomercial when you start talking about 'secret prices' like there's some kind of dealer conspiracy.

Skip the hype and stick to the facts: CCC gives you dealer invoice pricing on vehicles and factory options, continual updates on all sales incentives and contact with the dealers who can help you buy the car you want at the right price.

[D-3vil]

I like #1... excellent example of KISS principle.

[Daidojih]

I prefer number 2... sounds nice plus hits some words that will make listeners pay attention:

Get your new car cheaper with secret factory rebates. Save even more when you know the real pricing story. Visit CAR COST CANADA DOT COM for confidential price reports.

So for the person not paying that much attention they may catch the words like this:

Cheaper secret rebates. Save even more. Real Pricing Story. Confidential Price Reports.

At least would make me want to listen to the ad a second time.

[coriolis]

I like #2 the best.




Here's one for funsies

"Nice car Jay, finally made use of the aggressive pricing?"

*Wiping of car with sleeve sound*

"Yea, for $35,000 out the door, they gave me a great price!"

"For the navi package and leather? That's great! My wife paid $36,000 cash for the same car last month!"

"No, no, what? Mines the base model..."

"Can't be, ahah, they have a $2500 rebate and a $1000 cash rebate on it, don't be silly."

"W-W-Wait, what....?"

*Narrator phases in*

"Should of gotten a report on the secret dealers invoice. Car Cost Canada dot com will tell you about any secret rebates, incentives and rates, so you don't have to make the same mistake poor Jay did."

"I-I-I'll trade you my wife and car for your wife and car..!"

"What?"

"Uhhhhh................nevermind *nervous chuckle* "

[TT333]

I liked number one, but how do you guarantee one will buy their new car cheaper?

[m4gician]

I personally think 5 is the best. (680 news or wherever).

CCC is a service to help negotiate the LOWEST price I feel, and it often uncovers the "secret dealer rebates" (cue scary music).

[Rehan]

I like #5, but it sounds like the rebates are coming from CCC.

How about changing "Negotiate like a pro with secret factory rebates from CAR COST CANADA DOT COM" to "Negotiate like a pro with factory rebate secrets from CAR COST CANADA DOT COM" ?

That makes it clear that you're providing the secrets, not the rebates.

[CCCPres]

I like #5, but it sounds like the rebates are coming from CCC.

How about changing "Negotiate like a pro with secret factory rebates from CAR COST CANADA DOT COM" to "Negotiate like a pro with factory rebate secrets from CAR COST CANADA DOT COM" ?

That makes it clear that you're providing the secrets, not the rebates.

Thanks for all of the great feedback

Keep them coming

CCCPres

[m4gician]

Thanks for all of the great feedback

Keep them coming

CCCPres

...will u give RFD a discount for using CCC while we help you with your advertising for free?

[CCCPres]

...will u give RFD a discount for using CCC while we help you with your advertising for free?

Sure, but the best I can do is give you a CAA code to get the 25% CAA discount.

Need one? PM me or send me an email directly at pt@armadadata.com

Thx
CCCPres

[CCCPres]

Sure, but the best I can do is give you a CAA code to get the 25% CAA discount.

Need one? PM me or send me an email directly at pt@armadadata.com

Thx
CCCPres

Plus here's an extra bonus. Join now and I'll double your reports. Just join, then send me an email and I'll double your reports from 5 to 10.

For current CCC Members, just send me an email and I'll add 5 to your acct as well.

All you have to do is vote for the best ads above.

Thx
CCCPres
pt@armadadata.com (Please put RFD in the subject line)

[magnodrome]

I like #1 but there's liability issues with the slogan what if the individual cannot get a cheaper price using CCC. (trying to minimize the risk of potential headaches - unless there's a stipulation or disclosure somewhere).

[CCCPres]

I like #1 but there's liability issues with the slogan what if the individual cannot get a cheaper price using CCC. (trying to minimize the risk of potential headaches - unless there's a stipulation or disclosure somewhere).

Thx for pointing that one.

Our guarantee is very simple.

If you don't think our membership saved you money, we'll give you a 100% refund. Fair?

Cheers,
CCCPres

[lumlum1013]

it was either #1 or #6 for me.....but i chose #6....very clear and straight fwd statment