This is somewhat my job as I own a company related to advertisign/web design so here are a few tips:
1. The font is not easily understood, unless you try to read it. The rule is, your brain should be able to read a sign, without actually reading it and it should take less than 1 seconds. It takes more with this sign!
2. Brush strokes are a bit too much. I'd minimize it or come with with something different.
3. The color is not very distinguishable, make it easier to read. Maybe darker outline at the very least
3. Make the font bigger as well, including the pricing info. At this point it's looks more like an ad for a painter/artist than a restaurant as half of the sign is lost to useless strokes which should only be there to compliment the sign and not steal the attention.
1. The font is not easily understood, unless you try to read it. The rule is, your brain should be able to read a sign, without actually reading it and it should take less than 1 seconds. It takes more with this sign!
2. Brush strokes are a bit too much. I'd minimize it or come with with something different.
3. The color is not very distinguishable, make it easier to read. Maybe darker outline at the very least
3. Make the font bigger as well, including the pricing info. At this point it's looks more like an ad for a painter/artist than a restaurant as half of the sign is lost to useless strokes which should only be there to compliment the sign and not steal the attention.
I use voice typing, expect mistakes...